①Problem
Forth presentation's issue was success.
②My friend's presentation
1. Taku's presentation
Taku intriduced Thomas Edison as people who succeed. He was born in Ohio. He was intelligence, so his mother had him go to a technicl collage. When he was 15 years old, he was given telegraph technique. Two years later, he invented invention of telegraph. In 1887, he also inveted incandescent light bulb. The filament which he invented his last year day's was related to Japan.
2. Miho's presentation
Miho's contents was experience of brass band club which she joined. She was not good at read instroments. Then other members help her. After they coontinued practicing, they got a shilver prize. their teacher said " You are good, but this is shilver prize." Miho have this message in her mind from then.
3. Ayari's presentation
She showed five her opinion to achieve success. First is "Be confident about myself". Second is " Be kind". Third is "Try something I've never done once". Fourth is "Meet a person of fortune". Fifth is "Live my way independently". And she introduced Abraham Lincoin's word. This is "Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed, is more important than any other ine thing."
4. Mana's presentation
Mana introduced a difinition of success. This is setting small goals to achieve success. To do so, we can come true our dream step by step. And she told us messages of Winston Churchill and Annold Schwarzeneggar. I was impressed by the latter opinion.
5. Aya's presentation
Aya think that success is not acieve the goal. She also intriduced some message of famous people. The some people said " Succes is happy!" "Success is good relationship for people". Barack Obama said "Success is to change people's life." Bill Gates said "Success affects to society"
③My presentation
I care about a thing that my power point don't have only pictures when I made power point. I intriduced my success story. My success in meeting English. It is changed my life. I could have some great experience by meeting English, and English made me who have nothing have s confident. English is indispensable to me.
You spoke whole sentences in the same speed and it made the important part unclear. When you speak the most important part, you should speak more slowly than the other parts. If you do so, you can tell listeners more clearly what you want to say.
ReplyDeleteI was impressed to hear that your success is meeting English. But I didn't hear some parts because you didn't tell the end of a sentence clearly. Therefore, if you speak more clearly, we can hear and understand easily.
ReplyDeleteI was surprised that I heard how you had encountered English. Sometimes, I couldn't hear what you said. If you leave time sentence and sentence, your presentation will be good to hear and understand.
ReplyDeleteSince you used colored papers and picked up some words you wanted to tell us, I understood your opinion well. However, the speed of your speaking was a little fast for me and I missed hearing some words. You may well speak more slowly next time.
ReplyDeleteYour presentation was very good because your paper was clearly and colorful. But I think you should talk more clearly while you do your presentation. If you talk the important part of your presentation, you should talk slower and louder. Then, your listeners can understand what is the important thing what you want to say.
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